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Promotional Gifts Are Not A New Concept ting $3.00 an hour and $72.00 a day. So don’t waste another nickel . . .”Promotional gifts are all time favorites. Shoppers across the world have always been enthusiastic about these promotional gifts offered by online shops, restaurants, hotels, tour and travel companies, groceries, etc, to feel that childishly crazy sense of satisfaction of getting something free of cost. Shops, restaurants, hotels, on the other hand, have very effectively met this unique need by keenly devising enticing marketing strategies so that the shoppers are never denied of th The last two examples are “benefits.” And you have just witnessed the magical transformation from “feature” to “benefit” and that transformation is powerful. This is what Joe Blow’s brochure – and yours – should be packed with –piled with benefit, upon benefit, upon benefit. Even when you have to briefly talk about your company’s expertise, always frame it in terms of benefits. So to use the Joe Blow example again. Instead of simply saying: “In business for 50 years” implying your expertise and leaving the reader to say “That’s nice”,Joe Blow’s brochure should say something like “By hiring us, you ge Transitioning Your Career Toward the New E-conomy: Part I I’d like to ask you two questions. Your first question: How many times have you begun reading a brochure only to think to yourself “That’s nice. They sure do a lot” and then thrown it away?Throughout our lives we all look back at the choices we’ve made and reflect upon their impact on who we are and what we have become. Some results are easier to measure than others. We can easily measure many of our choices by our wealth, position, and possessions. Others may be more difficult to quantify and might include love, happiness, reputation, and knowledge. The one saving grace for us as human beings is the opportunity to grow and change through the choices we make continue Now, for your second question (and this is only for those brave enough to answer it.) And how many times—do you think--has someone begun reading YOUR brochure only to think to themselves “That’s nice. They sure do a lot” and then thrown it away. (If you were brave enough to answer the second question truthfully,chances are, there were more times your brochure was trashed than you would want.) And you’re not alone. Most brochure writers – and those who hire them – think that the way to attract customers is to prove to those customers that you’re the greatest company that ever walked the earth. And so the brochure copy goes on, and on, and on, about “Established in the year 2 AD, our company has been on the cutting edge of—blah-blah, blah-blah, blah . . . .” Bor-ing! Wouldn’t you agree? I mean, really, who wants to read some pompous prose about all the accomplishments of XYZ Company from time immemorial? In the back of your mind you’re probably saying, “So what? What’s in it for me?”And if you’re saying it . . . perhaps your prospects and customers are saying it, too. Frightening, isn’t it? But before you go wrapping fish in all those brochures sitting in your office, vowing never again to mention the word “trifold” as long as you live, let me share with you a marketing copywriter’s secret that will have you reeling in your prospects. And that is knowing the difference between features and benefits. You see, when most brochure writers – and the people who hire them –think “our brochure” they immediately think “Of course it’s about us.” And they begin writing all that long-winded, self-congratulatory, stuffy, pompous prose that really does work better wrapping fish than reeling in prospects. That's because that “blah-blah-blah-blah-BLAH” prose contains "features.” What a “feature” is, is what you do. For example, in the brochure for Joe Blow Plumbing, it says: “we fix leaky faucets.” That’s a feature. And that’s information, but it doesn’t connect with what the prospect needs. It doesn’t tell the prospect why it’s important to “fix faucets.” And, even more important, it doesn’t meet the prospect’s needs, it doesn’t solve the problem for them. It doesn’t relieve their pain. So, instead of saying “we fix leaky faucets” Joe Blow’s brochure should begin by saying something like “Your leaky faucet means your money’s going down the drain. Don’t waste another nickel. Call us.” Or, an even better example (if this is truly a fact.) “For every minute your faucet leaks, you’re sending 5-cents down the drain. That means you’re wasting $3.00 an hour and $72.00 a day. So don’t waste another nickel . . .” The last two examples are “benefits.” And you have just witnessed the magical transformation from “feature” to “benefit” and that transformation is powerful. This is what Joe Blow’s brochure – and yours – should be packed with –piled with benefit, upon benefit, upon benefit. Even when you have to briefly talk about your company’s expertise, always frame it in terms of benefits. So to use the Joe Blow example again. Instead of simply saying: “In business for 50 years” implying your expertise and leaving the reader to say “That’s nice”,Joe Blow’s brochure should say something like “By hiring us, you get In The Wrong Job? - CareersCoach o attract customers is to prove to those customers that you’re the greatest company that ever walked the earth. And so the brochure copy goes on, and on, and on, about “Established in the year 2 AD, our company has been on the cutting edge of—blah-blah, blah-blah, blah . . . .”Have you ever found yourself wondering if you are in the right job? Or if there is some other job out there that might be a better fit? To find out take our quiz.The alarm goes off on Monday morning. . .A. You leap out of bed! Because Monday is your favorite day!B. You switch off the snooze button on your alarm at least 3 or 4 times then roll out of bed and attempt to brush your teeth and hair at the same time so that you are not late for work. Bor-ing! Wouldn’t you agree? I mean, really, who wants to read some pompous prose about all the accomplishments of XYZ Company from time immemorial? In the back of your mind you’re probably saying, “So what? What’s in it for me?”And if you’re saying it . . . perhaps your prospects and customers are saying it, too. Frightening, isn’t it? But before you go wrapping fish in all those brochures sitting in your office, vowing never again to mention the word “trifold” as long as you live, let me share with you a marketing copywriter’s secret that will have you reeling in your prospects. And that is knowing the difference between features and benefits. You see, when most brochure writers – and the people who hire them –think “our brochure” they immediately think “Of course it’s about us.” And they begin writing all that long-winded, self-congratulatory, stuffy, pompous prose that really does work better wrapping fish than reeling in prospects. That's because that “blah-blah-blah-blah-BLAH” prose contains "features.” What a “feature” is, is what you do. For example, in the brochure for Joe Blow Plumbing, it says: “we fix leaky faucets.” That’s a feature. And that’s information, but it doesn’t connect with what the prospect needs. It doesn’t tell the prospect why it’s important to “fix faucets.” And, even more important, it doesn’t meet the prospect’s needs, it doesn’t solve the problem for them. It doesn’t relieve their pain. So, instead of saying “we fix leaky faucets” Joe Blow’s brochure should begin by saying something like “Your leaky faucet means your money’s going down the drain. Don’t waste another nickel. Call us.” Or, an even better example (if this is truly a fact.) “For every minute your faucet leaks, you’re sending 5-cents down the drain. That means you’re wasting $3.00 an hour and $72.00 a day. So don’t waste another nickel . . .” The last two examples are “benefits.” And you have just witnessed the magical transformation from “feature” to “benefit” and that transformation is powerful. This is what Joe Blow’s brochure – and yours – should be packed with –piled with benefit, upon benefit, upon benefit. Even when you have to briefly talk about your company’s expertise, always frame it in terms of benefits. So to use the Joe Blow example again. Instead of simply saying: “In business for 50 years” implying your expertise and leaving the reader to say “That’s nice”,Joe Blow’s brochure should say something like “By hiring us, you ge Air Liquide: Driving Liquid Air r office, vowing never again to mention the word “trifold” as long as you live, let me share with you a marketing copywriter’s secret that will have you reeling in your prospects.Have you ever heard of liquid air? The process of liquifying air was a major scientific achievement that took place over 100 years ago. Even after 100 years there are only a few companies that liquify air, which is probably why you've never heard of it before. Liquifying air is a cheap way to isolate different gasses like oxygen and nitrogen.The task of liquefying air began in 1892, when Frenchman Georges Claude began working with acetylene. At the time, acetylene was though And that is knowing the difference between features and benefits. You see, when most brochure writers – and the people who hire them –think “our brochure” they immediately think “Of course it’s about us.” And they begin writing all that long-winded, self-congratulatory, stuffy, pompous prose that really does work better wrapping fish than reeling in prospects. That's because that “blah-blah-blah-blah-BLAH” prose contains "features.” What a “feature” is, is what you do. For example, in the brochure for Joe Blow Plumbing, it says: “we fix leaky faucets.” That’s a feature. And that’s information, but it doesn’t connect with what the prospect needs. It doesn’t tell the prospect why it’s important to “fix faucets.” And, even more important, it doesn’t meet the prospect’s needs, it doesn’t solve the problem for them. It doesn’t relieve their pain. So, instead of saying “we fix leaky faucets” Joe Blow’s brochure should begin by saying something like “Your leaky faucet means your money’s going down the drain. Don’t waste another nickel. Call us.” Or, an even better example (if this is truly a fact.) “For every minute your faucet leaks, you’re sending 5-cents down the drain. That means you’re wasting $3.00 an hour and $72.00 a day. So don’t waste another nickel . . .” The last two examples are “benefits.” And you have just witnessed the magical transformation from “feature” to “benefit” and that transformation is powerful. This is what Joe Blow’s brochure – and yours – should be packed with –piled with benefit, upon benefit, upon benefit. Even when you have to briefly talk about your company’s expertise, always frame it in terms of benefits. So to use the Joe Blow example again. Instead of simply saying: “In business for 50 years” implying your expertise and leaving the reader to say “That’s nice”,Joe Blow’s brochure should say something like “By hiring us, you ge ROI: False Conclusions Joe Blow Plumbing, it says: “we fix leaky faucets.” That’s a feature. And that’s information, but it doesn’t connect with what the prospect needs. It doesn’t tell the prospect why it’s important to “fix faucets.” And, even more important, it doesn’t meet the prospect’s needs, it doesn’t solve the problem for them. It doesn’t relieve their pain.Drawing false conclusions from Return on Investment analysis can be embarrassing and it can be costly.Here’s an example from business in managing risk and calculating Return on Investment ROI:The management of company A wanted to decrease the cost of manufacturing a key product. This was in light of new technologies that had just become available.They have 60% of the available business with this product and their closest competitor, Company B, has 14% of the ma So, instead of saying “we fix leaky faucets” Joe Blow’s brochure should begin by saying something like “Your leaky faucet means your money’s going down the drain. Don’t waste another nickel. Call us.” Or, an even better example (if this is truly a fact.) “For every minute your faucet leaks, you’re sending 5-cents down the drain. That means you’re wasting $3.00 an hour and $72.00 a day. So don’t waste another nickel . . .” The last two examples are “benefits.” And you have just witnessed the magical transformation from “feature” to “benefit” and that transformation is powerful. This is what Joe Blow’s brochure – and yours – should be packed with –piled with benefit, upon benefit, upon benefit. Even when you have to briefly talk about your company’s expertise, always frame it in terms of benefits. So to use the Joe Blow example again. Instead of simply saying: “In business for 50 years” implying your expertise and leaving the reader to say “That’s nice”,Joe Blow’s brochure should say something like “By hiring us, you ge Resign With Class: When Should You Resign From A Job? ting $3.00 an hour and $72.00 a day. So don’t waste another nickel . . .”When should you resign from a job?Certainly, when you get a new job and are currently employed by someone else, you need to figure out when to deliver the news to your boss that you have a new job and are resigning.I’ve found that some people want to run out and resign right away as soon as they have a job offer even before they have actually received an offer in writing!Before you resign from your current employer, take some time to ensure that everythi The last two examples are “benefits.” And you have just witnessed the magical transformation from “feature” to “benefit” and that transformation is powerful. This is what Joe Blow’s brochure – and yours – should be packed with –piled with benefit, upon benefit, upon benefit. Even when you have to briefly talk about your company’s expertise, always frame it in terms of benefits. So to use the Joe Blow example again. Instead of simply saying: “In business for 50 years” implying your expertise and leaving the reader to say “That’s nice”,Joe Blow’s brochure should say something like “By hiring us, you get our 50 years of expertise. So we really know how to fix your leaky faucet, fast.” See the difference? You are providing them with important information about your business, but you’re doing it in terms of benefits. So that’s the one thing your brochure absolutely, positively, most definitely needs—it needs to be benefit-driven. (c)CSC Group, LLC
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